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[Alien No. 1]

I found this to be funny

I really like it. The alien is very detailed and interesting. The PDA isn't a bad touch either haha.

[Another]

Haha, brilliant

I guess you don't need to be a great artist to be a genius of artistic comedy.

But the character can be a little less, uhh, stick-like.

[More Wine?]

Close, but no cigar

It's looks really nice and polished, both in the sense of shine and professionalism, but it didn't really look right from the first time I looked at it. I then decided to look at actual photos of red wine. I saw that the shadowing comes more at the sides of the glass rather than almost no shadowing at all. Wine and wine glasses aren't completely translucent, there has to be shadows on certain areas of the wine and the glass holding it. It does look nice, but it looks a bit unrealistic.

[Sophitia]

A bit disproportionate

Either her head seems too big or her neck is a bit long. She needs shoulder muscles. Her body needs to be facing either left or right, it needs to be consistent. Her legs are a bit too long too. Also her shield goes from above her elbow to below her hand and the inside should be facing out. I might not be able to draw women well, but I can tell if something is proportionate or not. To see what I mean, I drew a few corrections on top of your picture and added notes.

http://i40.tinypic.com/2cxb37q.jpg

The above picture will explain anything. Just tell me if you can't read or you don't understand some of it.

Blud-Shot responds:

thanks for the pic, I took a look at the anatomy corrections and it does help me see where the week points are. That image though is very old it was done when SC II was out but I still have some problems with the anatomy I don't know why though lol I have been drawing humanoid characters since I was 4.

[Wolf Crosshatch]

SO CLOSE

This is really nice and the technique you used was perfect. The only glaring flaw I see is the nose. I know that the technique that is solely used is crosshatching, but it just bothers me that it doesn't seem real enough to fit with the rest of the wolf. It needs that slightly bumpy texture that it's supposed to have, gah. I just can't stop looking at it, now that I noticed it.

Omegaro responds:

To tell the truth, this was my first attempt at something so permanent(never used pens so extensively). So I was really unsure of myself. When it came to the nose, I knew I wasn't skilled enough to try anything too detailed. So I went with something simpler. But thanks anyways. ^^